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YWCA Original Manual (pdf)
This "Aquatics" manual is very poorly organized, with rules, policies, and guidelines all together,
missing and confusing information, inconsistent usage of terms, and no visual design to help the reader
navigate the document.
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Portfolio Categories
Skills Used
- Audience analysis
- Document planning
- Grammar
- Style sheet development
- MS Word
- Analysis
- Persuasiveness
- Copy editing
- Developmental editing
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Comprehensive Analysis (pdf)
This document presents an evaluation of the issues with the manual regarding content, organization, visual
design, and illustrations and presents corresponding recommendations.
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Revised YWCA Manual (pdf)
I reorganized the content into sections and added headings and a table of contents to aid navigation. Without a
client to answer all the questions, they remain as comments in the Word document but not in the PDF version.
Right-click to download the Word version.
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Style Sheet (pdf)
This is the style sheet I used to ensure consistent formatting and style throughout the document, as well
as to note standards that would be used with terminology.
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Cover Letter (pdf)
The cover letter sent with the revised manual summarizes the most important issues and the major revisions
I made to the manual.
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